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 Nothing goes unseen -

my vast eyes don't yet spot you.

Perhaps I'll sleep here?

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This Haiku is an excerpt from a Choka I wrote for a Writer's Guild project. I wasn't exactly happy with it, but I do like this Haiku.

It brings to mind the season of Fall and what it represents - letting go of what is no longer needed. I am hoping to achieve this so that I may enjoy a restful, healing Winter.

Interpritation Required

I dreamed that I was a giant living in a meadow. I was the owner of a sword that everybody wanted to borrow. But no matter what reason they gave me for wanting to use my sword, I always adjudicated to deny their request. This made me sad.
I woke up with that numb, tingly feeling that is usually associated with poor circulation.

Giant's Haiku  

  I watch them approach;

my heart drops, heavy with doubt.

Will none have a cause?